4 commits

Author	SHA1	Message	Date
John Bowdre	f5a3a09343	publish draft	2023-08-27 14:59:18 -05:00
John Bowdre	7d6303c2c6	more tweaks from JD	2023-08-27 14:56:47 -05:00
John Bowdre	a20dccbc50	update with JD's notes	2023-08-27 14:30:47 -05:00
John Bowdre	3e4038b2cb	update draft	2023-08-27 14:02:59 -05:00