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 title = "Hi, I'm John."
-description = "A brief introduction to me, this blog, and the kinds of things you're likely to see here."
+description = "A brief introduction to me, this blog, and what you're likely to see here."
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 You've (somehow) managed to stumble upon my dark corner on the internet.[^1]
 
 ## Who am I?
-I've always enjoyed writing code and solving problems, but learned early in my career that I didn't want to be a full-time programmer. So I spent many years administering virtual systems and their supporting infrastructure, while writing scripts to help automate the management of those systems.
+I've always enjoyed writing code and solving problems, but I learned early in my career that I didn't want to be a full-time programmer. So I instead spent years as a system administrator, first with Windows and Linux servers and then a focus on virtualization. Along the way, I still flexed my coding muscles by writing scripts and tools to help me work more efficiently.
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 I'm a part of a small *Platforms Engineering* team inside a large corporation. We preach the Good Word of *DevSecOps* and help our internal customers modernize the way they build, deploy, and ship products.